dandv's "English Police crop"

It starts with your question: no sentence capitalization, and no capitalization of the ‘I’ pronoun.

If we go to your entries we see a lack of apostrophes (“im”, “its” instead of “it’s”, typos, and random capitalization (“tWO”).

A very simple way to improve your writing is to download Firefox and benefit from its (not “it’s”) built-in spell checker.